Modern Fit Dress
Tuesday, August 31st, 2010
I need help with the revision of a paragraph, how to revise this paragraph?
United States has been seen as a place of leadership. Somewhere people can come and express their ideas freely and people around the world see America as a land of opportunity and individuality. But today the conditions of modern society you react in certain ways certain things. In order to have imitators in people to change what they are, they have become. Afraid to act or dress as they please. The fear of being marked in some groups of people. We let the company decide where to fit
Depednds is largely about how the brain remembers your business. remember that if you give orders out loud all the time until I can remember. what you can do is read the first sentence 10 times a day at the end of the day writing, so no mistakes are learning the second sentence, the next day + sentecnce the first. or simply read aloud (or have someone read to you) wirite then down. rewrite and rinse and repeat until perfection. may take some time, but if you want to remember anything. read, cover, write, check (rewrite). that's all. If you can sign reading, you can listen to read to help you remember. I hope this helped. ps no expert, but now a day like today is written and start a sentence with-GOAL. not grammatically correct. As I said a professional writing, but check for errors (last two sentences a little dubious). If you need to write can claim this as a reformulation of the last two (both fear fear)? instead of the phrases that you can put "…. imitators afraid to act or dress as they please, the fear of being marked in some groups of people. "
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